by Writing_Assignment
Amongst other things, check the difference between 'desert' and 'dessert'!
Get an Editor!
Fucking husbands they are one big pain in the arse. They see a piece of skirt and all of a sudden it's open season. Couldn't keep it in his trousers. Little boy have tool will play. You write it up ok though, and I'm glad Ian is getting his end away, that Yvonne seems very obliging. She's a good girl I'll wander off now and read about what else they get up to. I think Lilly needs a bit of brotherly love as well.