All Comments on 'I'll Have The Usual'

I saw your story pop up and knew that I’d enjoy it like all of your others that I’ve read. You have an excellent talent for writing erotic stories. I’ll always remember to check them out when I see them. I feel you you did a great job telling this character’s story. Thank You!!!

seems to dry and factual like skimming over it all, not good

Thanks for the comment Myer. I am trying to tell the story from the perspective of the hooker, and I imagine them viewing their life like a computer. Erotic things are just common place to them. Compartmentalization would allow them to stay okay with the path they are on. Yet, I will have to consider that I am not giving enough detail.