All Comments on 'Intimacy Pt. 07'

Immunocompromised and easily read. Cannot help but smile throughout this piece while easily immersed in the mutual seduction so well paced. Breast/nipple play so beautifully tumescent — the contrast so erotic/real. Loved the momentary reflections each shared within themselves as the passion played out. Once again you pair Eleanor with a uniquely interesting character and give us further glimpse into Hayden and their relationship. Very creative writing.

Love the character you’ve given us in Zari. Someone who knows exactly what they want…

You can’t beat the Roaring Twenties for sexiness. Top stuff!

Scintillating stuff!

Loved the device of the mistletoe. Very creative.

Phwoar! I need to lie down in a darkened room…

Or Eleanor will take charge of Zari and resume her courtship of her man.

This is very good indeed.