All Comments on 'Inverted World Ch. 01: Drawing'

Daf what would you survive on if not food?

dull..........boring..........

Survive on special nutritional tablets from dispensing machines. They completely replace our food, but have no taste.

Very disjointed and that makes it difficult to follow, or find, a story line.

Maybe it'seems me, but I couldn'the put more than a few scenarios together!

My suggestion is, try drawing pornographic sketches.

Interesting concept but it lacks something...

Why have a kitchen or table?

This was posted 6 months ago and again today? Obviously, from the old comments, it was as bad then as it is now.

Eeteone to adjudicate this essay, and include the word scattered I comments . . .THEY WOULD BE CORRECT !

Fortunately, I don't recall having g ever read something by this author. Had I,I would have forgotten how terrible a writer this is . . .That would be the only reason I might have read this offering.

My rating is off the charts negatively.

I would advise reading some of the higher rated stories and trying to see what they have in common and emulate that.