It was Just Lunch...

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He wrote "I am a whore. I have been paid to be here and be used by any who see fit to use me" on her chest and stomach in bright red.

"The desk clerk will offer this room to certain people who check in. You may end up being here for a few days. Or maybe someone will take pity on you and call your husband to come get you, if he decides he wants to."

He walked to the door. "Goodbye Grace. It has been my pleasure. I am off to find the next cheating whore and teach her a lesson. Somewhere in Manchester... another friend of Darren's as it happens. He seems to attract them." He chuckled and left the room.

She was alone in the dark. Waiting for what would happen next. She gave up, she was no longer going to fight it. Whoever and whatever wanted to use her, she was resigned to her life now. No one would save her. She just hoped her mother and sister never found out.

Please God, do not let them find out.

Epilogue

Darren watched the videos he had been sent. He shook his head in wonder, they had succeeded, whether or not she knew it now, it went as planned. Soon he would take possession of her from Tabby. Then the second part of his plan would come to fruition. There were three more women on his list, one here in Manchester, one more in Florida and one in Texas. For now that was enough.

The place in Arizona was almost done and he would have somewhere private to play with his toys. This was going to be a fine year after all, and once he was done with them, maybe he would sell them, either in Egypt or Saudi Arabia. Right now though, he sat back as the next woman on his list finished sucking his cock.

"Yeah Tracy you will be doing this and so much more. If I really feel evil, maybe I will add your daughter Columbia to the mix. That would be awesome, fucking mother and daughter together. They do look so much alike."

His thoughts slowly shut down as he exploded in Tracy's mouth. Filling her small mouth to over-flowing, some she could swallow and the rest flew out her nose and mouth when she coughed.

Yes, this was going to be an amazing little Harem he was putting together. Could life get any better?

The End???

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TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthor12 months agoAuthor

Anonymous. Thank you for the feedback. Perhaps I should resubmit with more background explaining how the motivation behind the action of the villain is revenge.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

This is not revenge this is just horrible writing the revenge was if brad got his revenge and later the sons of grace on their friends and father this was a bad story 1 star.

TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthorabout 1 year agoAuthor

Actually, the woman it was based on has that bra size.... Everyone else in the story has more... Accommodating breasts.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You lost me when in only the second sentence of this long and winding story the woman’s breast size was said to be 44 DDDD. Good God, what is this adolescent fascination with impossibly huge boobs? I knew right then this was going to be a loser of a story..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

No, even skimming this is not satisfying my need for revenge in this story found in the revenge heading.

Revenge would have the husband of the first humiliated husband, Brad, finding this asshole and slowly torturing him to death while his wife Liza watched. When Darren is dead, Liza takes his place and has her clit torn out as a prelude to maybe a week of abuse before her lifts go out. I didn't see one iota of indication that the scene played out in the opening of this story was Brad's sick fantasy. What the author presented was the kind of thing that would drive a man insane, so what I propose would be a real possibility. One that most men would love to read about.

RanDog025RanDog025about 1 year ago

The very low score should tell the story teller something but I doubt it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I really enjoyed it. I gave it 5 stars. Since I've become numb from reading a bunch of Cuckold stories in the "Loving Wives" forum, this actually seemed tame for Non Consent. It could almost be considered revenge by some of the husbands in that forum, while in this forum it's really great writing. And at the very beginning of this story, I had to double check I wasn't in the LW forum, since it started out as one. From there it only got better, with Grace and Darren meeting in the park for lunch (sex). Then the blackmail, meeting in a hotel room, being videoed and tied up (a little BDSM never hurts) followed by hours of sex for her...it sure read like an LW story. Especially at the end where Darren is thinking about adding Grace to his stable. A nice twist there, not knowing he set it all up. Very nice way you weaved the story together. I wish I could give you more than 5 stars (I would too), but we're limited to that at a sitting.

Thank You for sharing it with us. :-)

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