All Comments on 'It's No Big Deal Ch. 01'

by Lisasuzanne

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KarotteKarotteover 1 year ago

I'm really happy to see another story from you, as the last one was a really great reading experience. I'm looking forward on how this story will develop. The start has been very promising.

brickman4brickman4over 1 year ago

This is a very enjoyable read . I some ways I could feel the excitement the thrill of showing you off by pushing you to feel an exspirace that most likely would never try . Hopefully a safe space with your lover and friends could lead to teasing and exposing in some public places , just pushing it a little more each time .

5 stars .

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very Nice ! Cant wait for the next chapter.. Will she be more daring and going outside ?

Jay142Jay142over 1 year ago

From one author to another, that was a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

When will chapter 2 be online ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting premise.

But lacks needed details during each sex scene. Also dialog about how what's happening feels to each of them step by step.

Three stars.

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