All Comments on 'Ivanovs Ch. 04'

I just can not believe that you ended it there please hurry with the next chapter

She needs to meet her end soon. ASAP! Loved it. Please hurry with the next chapter.

Esmeralda has become insane. I can't wait to here what she says about Gernick's mother's death. Can't wait to read what Gregor will finally do to end this. Or am I wrong on that point?:)

Esmeralda's web of lies will soon be here own undoing. Can't wait for the update.

Emesrelda is her own worst enemy. She is going to let something slip out when her madness finally gets the best of her.

I agree with Decadentdessert, I can't to see it come crashing down around her shoulders. You freakin nailed it lady. I started reading so fast that I stopped and went back to see if I missed something. Bang baby; BANG!!!!

ur comment said exactly what in wanted to say........................................

** gettin on bad**

darling essie must go....... cant friggin wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BANG BABY BANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Essie is out the box. Can't wait for the next chapter. You rock.

stories on the site - I check several times a day for updates - hanging on the edge of my seat

I can't believe that she doesn't know that all her kids are turning against her can't wait to see that happen

GIRLFRIEND YOU BLINDSIDED ME. I WAS SO DEEP INTO THIS STORY THAT I DIDN'T REALIZE I WAS AT THE BOTTOM OF THE PAGE AND READING THE LAST LINE OF TEXT UNTIL I SAW "SO ENDS CHAPTER 4". I HOLLERED "HELL NO SHE DIDN'T DO THAT TO US". MY PITBULL LOOKED AT ME LIKE I DIDN'T DO ANYTHING SO WHY ARE U HOLLERING? (LOL) HOW COULD U LEAVE US OUT THERE LIKE THAT? (ROKMSL) GIRL, U ROCKED THIS CHAPTER IN EVERY WAY POSSIBLE AND THEN RUBBED THOSE ROCKS TOGETHER TO GET A LIL BIT MORE OUT OF THEM. I CAN HARDLY WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS TO COME OUT TO SEE HOW THIS ASS WHIPPING COME ABOUT AND ALSO HOW THE SIBLING AND THEIR SPOUSES COME TOGETHER AS A FAMILY IN THE FUTURE.

...There's no need to yell.

YELL YOUR DAMN HEAD OFF OVER A GREAT STORY!!!!

Take that bitch down!

I was confused by the time elements -- several "next mornings" and three days and four days and ... I got lost -- but I'm excited to see how it all turns out.

Is Esmerelda really their birth mother, because I can't imagine a mother being so cruel to her own flesh n blood. She sounds like someone who stole ppls babes to maintain her hold over her puppet husband. Anyway I look forward to reading more of ur gr8 story

Exscuse my language....KILL THAT BITCH!!

YEAH KILL THE BITCH AND THE FATHER AS WELL!!!

I hope Esmeralda gets hers