by Iread2relax
Is Esmerelda really their birth mother, because I can't imagine a mother being so cruel to her own flesh n blood. She sounds like someone who stole ppls babes to maintain her hold over her puppet husband. Anyway I look forward to reading more of ur gr8 story
I was confused by the time elements -- several "next mornings" and three days and four days and ... I got lost -- but I'm excited to see how it all turns out.
GIRLFRIEND YOU BLINDSIDED ME. I WAS SO DEEP INTO THIS STORY THAT I DIDN'T REALIZE I WAS AT THE BOTTOM OF THE PAGE AND READING THE LAST LINE OF TEXT UNTIL I SAW "SO ENDS CHAPTER 4". I HOLLERED "HELL NO SHE DIDN'T DO THAT TO US". MY PITBULL LOOKED AT ME LIKE I DIDN'T DO ANYTHING SO WHY ARE U HOLLERING? (LOL) HOW COULD U LEAVE US OUT THERE LIKE THAT? (ROKMSL) GIRL, U ROCKED THIS CHAPTER IN EVERY WAY POSSIBLE AND THEN RUBBED THOSE ROCKS TOGETHER TO GET A LIL BIT MORE OUT OF THEM. I CAN HARDLY WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS TO COME OUT TO SEE HOW THIS ASS WHIPPING COME ABOUT AND ALSO HOW THE SIBLING AND THEIR SPOUSES COME TOGETHER AS A FAMILY IN THE FUTURE.
I can't believe that she doesn't know that all her kids are turning against her can't wait to see that happen
stories on the site - I check several times a day for updates - hanging on the edge of my seat
ur comment said exactly what in wanted to say........................................
** gettin on bad**
darling essie must go....... cant friggin wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I agree with Decadentdessert, I can't to see it come crashing down around her shoulders. You freakin nailed it lady. I started reading so fast that I stopped and went back to see if I missed something. Bang baby; BANG!!!!
Emesrelda is her own worst enemy. She is going to let something slip out when her madness finally gets the best of her.
Esmeralda's web of lies will soon be here own undoing. Can't wait for the update.
Esmeralda has become insane. I can't wait to here what she says about Gernick's mother's death. Can't wait to read what Gregor will finally do to end this. Or am I wrong on that point?:)
She needs to meet her end soon. ASAP! Loved it. Please hurry with the next chapter.
I just can not believe that you ended it there please hurry with the next chapter