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Click hereMove with me, chant with me, and if you're good I'll take you home with me.
"Excellent," Azalok said. "Just excellent."
Watching his sister, Azalok sighed happily, reflecting that after such a game performance of such a sublimely stupid danace, she still might get what she wanted after all -- eventually. For even his mighty cock was spent, his balls completely drained by his human lovers. In the chilly night air of Dis, Azalok was not horny, nor ravenous, nor did any of the usual demonic passions fill him.
He was simply content.
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WARNING! END NOTES APPROACHING!
Once again, completing this story took much longer than I intended. I sincerely apologize for the delay. And, as usual, I find I've overdelivered on sex and underdelivered on plot. I hope you all can forgive me, despite my many transgressions!
I have several ideas for future stories involving Jane and company, which I plan to continue developing just as soon as I've submitted this story. Thank you all so much for the support you've given me so far, and please continue to reach out with your comments and questions.
Special thanks to my friend G for reading my early drafts and also for the encouragement during tough periods of writer's block. It's good to have writer friends, folks!
END NOTES CONCLUDED. SEE YOU, SPACE COWBOY.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoThis story is easily one of my favorites! I cannot wait for the next one! It would be great to see alahna and jane both grow cocks. And to have azalok breed them both. Maybe some dp action once jane has the baby? And of course, they should all live in hell together.
ladylikelibbyover 2 years agoSo I just want to request a story where Jane is living in hell with Azalok and completing her degree as well as getting a job. Please note I have only read the previous two stories and not the third.
Anonymousover 2 years agoThis story was amazing, I do hope you continue it. Having Jane fuck A was perfect, I hope they do more of that in your next chapter. Maybe knocking her up with Jane's baby. Are they going home? Staying in hell as a threesome? So many possibilities, I can't wait....10 stars
Powersworderover 2 years agoAfter Jane has the baby, Azalok definitely needs to get them both pregnant!
Anonymousover 2 years agoI just wants to say that this is the only erotic story I have EVER felt the need to comment on. This series has literally everything. It’s well written, arousing, enjoyable, and has actual story. Like seriously. The world building is fun without it getting in the way.
I know you say that you overdeliver sex and under deliver plot but I have liked the current flow of things. Don’t get me wrong, I do like a little story/world building development. But I also like good fap material and don’t want to read too too much before getting there.
I’m excited to see what you do next. Best of luck!
Anonymousover 2 years agoAmazing story, much better than a lot of others in the same branch, by that i mean unrealistic anatomy, huge dicks, stomach deformation etc etc. Your stories are well written, incredibly erotic, and in my opinion the plot is pretty good, i like the relationships between the characters. Of course it’s still crazy, but it’s realistic in its own way, does that make any sense? Haha
NoctustheOwlover 2 years agoHey, Henry. Go play trials in tainted space or corruption of champions 2 for the answer to "can birth be erotisized?".
Another good read.
henryhawkmoorover 2 years agoAuthorHello friendly readers, Henry Hawkmoor here! I try not to make a habit of mixing it up in the comments, but some folks have posed some burning questions and I'm here to answer them.
@LitanyG, who asks if Jane will give birth in my next story. It's quite likely that she will, although I am still mulling over some plot ideas and I'm unsure of how to handle that. Can birth be eroticized? Should it? I can't decide. But in any case I think I've delayed paying off that particular plot thread long enough, so I hope you won't have to wait long to find out what happens.
@Gamergall126, who asks if Astarte was dancing the Macarena. Yes she was. I offer my sincerest apologies and hope you can forgive me for writing something so stupid.
@Anonymous, who requests that we see a pregnant Alahna. I know that many are hoping to see this, and I can tell you that I think it's likely to happen at some point. I have some ideas on the subject, but I would say that it will probably have to wait until another story or two has been published. Until then, please continue to look forward to it.
I also want to thank everyone else who has left me very kind and constructive comments. Writers really thrive on feedback (we're addicted to it, some might say), so the best way you can show your support is by leaving feedback for someone. Please leave me any other questions or suggestions you might have, and I'll be sure to respond in due course. Take it easy, folks!
Anonymousover 2 years agoAnother excellent edition in an awesome series! Thank you for writing.
My only request is to beg you to let us see Pregnant Alanha!
