All Comments on 'January Ch. 02'

2.33 PM makes no sense. AM does!

Make sure you put cuck tags and slutwife tags on your stories then people can avoid your stories if they don't like the idea

no sense to this story needs to be in the garbage not here

Too many words. Ponderous. Try again.

Please continue. It’s a slow burning but maybe worth for the outcome.

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Our cheating wife is torn between being a whore for men or going for the lesbian life. Either way poor cuck Mike is finished.

Writing, in man y ways, is NOT your forte.

Literally nothing new, rather predictable, again while your use of the dictionary is impressive, this is an non-erotic yawnfest.

Just another wifeslut/cuckold story if you ever give the husband some balls let him either divorce the wife or let him fuck some young sexy thing in revenge. This marriage looks like it has run its course and is or should be over.

I read #1 and #2 to see if there was improvement...Author, someone told you that your descriptive prose was great. They lied. Bye.