All Comments on 'Jennifer's Vacation Pt. 05'

Awesome!! Can't wait to read the rest of the parts

Strewth! The way you write the sex scenes are so powerful and passionate....well done maestro!

You should do a Vanessa and Sid from big daddy story

I love this series but I do have one note. The ages. You say that Uncle Jimmy is 69. Carole is 34. and Jennifer is 18. That makes Carole 16 when she had Jennifer. You also say Uncle Jimmy is 33 when Carole is born, which would make Uncle Jimmy 67.

Otherwise, I love this series and am glad you decided to continue it.

Now, this story is hot, no doubt about that, but honestly this is starting to feel like two separate stories. We went from the subtle blackmail of an uncle and niece with a fun little element of the aunt getting in on it where everyone was having fun to outright violence and brother-sister action with no subtlety.

Linda needs to make Carol her personal carpet muncher and have on her knees servicing Linda’s needs. Cheers