All Comments on 'Jill and Dan Ch. 05'

by aljames21

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It confusing to know if you are talking about Jill or Jane? You need to clarify where you are going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Tomorrow brings the news from a doctor that they're all going to die of an STD cocktail, shaken, not stirred.

tralan69ertralan69eralmost 2 years ago

not confusing,

I didn't find anything confusing.

Keep writing thank you

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