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CriticalThinkerCriticalThinkeralmost 4 years ago
Has potential

I like the way you are trying to build this up. Should hopefully turn out into a good piece of erotica. I think you should make your chapters longer, about 3 pages or more, instead of hurriedly pushing in a page at a time. Just my opinion.

OozingslutOozingslutalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

@CriticalThinker :

Thank you for your valuable feedback. I am glad you liked my work. I have posted the second chapter in this series. I hope you like it.

Please continue to share your views.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love the build up. Hope you post more

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Still working on this. An aspiring author hoping to entertain people through erotica while improving writing skills.

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