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Click hereI didn’t want to even think about that.
“Did you shoot any in your mouth?” she asked. I nodded. “Did you swallow it?” I didn’t know what to do, so I just nodded again. “Wow, that’s so hot. Here, I can help you with the rest.” She scooped some more of Kyle’s cum off my face with her fingers and stuck them in my mouth. I sucked them clean and swallowed. The taste was unpleasant but for some reason I couldn’t stop myself.
“We have to get cleaned up anyway before we go back to sleep,” she said, scooping the rest of Kyle’s cum off my face and into my mouth. I swallowed. Then she gathered up my cum on my belly and fed it to me too. Finally, she scooped up the rest of Kyle’s load off her front and fed it to me. “Oh wait, this is Kyle’s cum, not yours,” she said as I sucked her fingers clean. I’d forgotten she didn’t know all the cum on my face was his too. I hadn’t wanted her to know I’d swallowed his cum, but I guess that ship had sailed now.
“Oops,” I said.
“You’re so kinky,” she said. “I love it. And I love you.” She rolled over and kissed me. Her mouth tasted like Kyle’s dick and mine tasted like his spunk. She rolled back over.
I stared at the ceiling and wondered what was happening to me.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous2 months agoLooks like somebody is going to be shopping for Cock Cages...
Delicious Tale!
Thank You!
JAXXAJ6 months agoI find it hilarious that one anon fella is so pressed and in the closet that he feels the need to describe how stupid the story is. On every part. You're reading all of them, dick in hand, excited for each one? But you don't wanna admit that it's hot as fuck, so instead of fucking off to another story, you comment to satisfy your internal self-hatred. Go get fucked dude; reading stories doesn't compare to real dick. :)
Anonymousabout 1 year agoI would pay for the same story but Rachel's perspective / POV. I know there are moments she didn't tell her boyfriend or like she lied about it or she changed the story a little for him.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoGreat chapter- like both versions - outstanding- got to be one of top writers on Literotica
Anonymousover 4 years agoI agree with several others, drop the gay sissification stuff and just continue with her playing with the other guys. I wouldn’t mind seeing her getting it on with big dick mike or other big dick guys for that matter. Also you might want to introduce the possibility that she could get pregnant from these guys. That would be hot.
Anonymousover 4 years agoand by that I don’t just mean everyone’s cum. I agree with the comment you made, even after writing alternate timeline chapters both have still ended up pretty dark. They’re dark enough that without going back to check I couldn’t say which chapters were meant to be the standard story and which were the alternate.
I’m all in favour of people enjoying sex with pretty much whoever they want - by that I mean consenting adults who aren’t related to each other. I think it’s a pretty broad spectrum, the remaining categories of non con, incest, animals and underage set off the hell no and yuk responses.
I’ve got low self esteem so to me forced humiliation is too close to non con, if he gets off on humiliation then fair enough. I hated the slut-shaming from Mike and by the cretins on the beach, judgemental shite. I explained my opinion on a previous chapter.
Not sure I even want to carry on reading this, I don’t want to be judgemental so I’ll leave you to it.
Good luck with your writing.
Tess (UK)
dancerbubbleover 4 years agoThis is my favourite story on the site, love so much of the content. Seems like at the end of the chapters you rush to add sexual content. I would much rather wait for all the building and blue balls and tension the main character gets.
I’m gay and I didn’t find the end very hot, just because it didn’t seem like there was a reason for it to happen. If he gets involved I think it should be because he’s begging for them to fuck her. Or maybe in weird ways like they cum on Rachel’s food but he eats it. Maybe a separate time line that’s just a one off where he begs to feel what Rachel feels. Just felt out of place. The under he blanket stuff was hot, and I think it’s always hottest when Rachel is just relaxed and the guys are being perverts.
Anonymousover 4 years agoThe only negative thing I kinda agree with is that your teasing, how-far-will-she-take-it parts are just amazingly good, and a slow build up is the best. But overall, the panties, the cum, the back and forth dialog between the two of them is just... god damn it's fantastic.
My only advice would be that soft pull back, of maybe Brain trying to push the breaks on this whole thing like chapter three would be in order, with Mike trying to escalate things even farther (and of course pushing for his own blowjob). Damn I can't wait to see where this goes next.
