All Comments on 'Karen's Night Out'

I enjoyed that, the attention to detail was extraordinary. There were some forgivable typos but nothing to distract the reader and the hot steamy sex was amazing.

Unsettled, then thoroughly satiated; like what you are doing with Karen. The dialogue over drinks and over sex reveals much about both characters. As a near hopeless romantic, liked the closing lines and wondering.

@AliceGee thank you Alice. I am so glad you like it. (I'll try to spot the typos better, note time). K xxx

@Migbird Thanks so much. I'm glad you like the way to story is evolving. There is more to come. K xxx

Engage an editor. I quit reading after someone punched a nipple. The typos detract from the pacing of the story. Just as things start rolling, a mishap intervenes. Read it out loud to yourself. You’ll be amazed at how many of these mistakes you catch on your own.

Bonding over Shubert. Then really hot sex. This could be serious.

I’m listening to Emerson’s 1988 recording while I type this.

@toesucker1 a sublime piece of music, isn’t it? Glad you liked it. K xx