All Comments on 'Karen's Night Out'

@toesucker1 a sublime piece of music, isn’t it? Glad you liked it. K xx

Bonding over Shubert. Then really hot sex. This could be serious.

I’m listening to Emerson’s 1988 recording while I type this.

Engage an editor. I quit reading after someone punched a nipple. The typos detract from the pacing of the story. Just as things start rolling, a mishap intervenes. Read it out loud to yourself. You’ll be amazed at how many of these mistakes you catch on your own.

@Migbird Thanks so much. I'm glad you like the way to story is evolving. There is more to come. K xxx

@AliceGee thank you Alice. I am so glad you like it. (I'll try to spot the typos better, note time). K xxx

Unsettled, then thoroughly satiated; like what you are doing with Karen. The dialogue over drinks and over sex reveals much about both characters. As a near hopeless romantic, liked the closing lines and wondering.

I enjoyed that, the attention to detail was extraordinary. There were some forgivable typos but nothing to distract the reader and the hot steamy sex was amazing.