All Comments on 'Katie Loves Cynthia'

I completely overlooked the story title!

What a superb shift in the story's focus: two, even three stories in one. Nice work.

Written with the same enchanting touch as your first story. Lovely erotica. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! I truly appreciate your kind words. It means so much to me. Thank you!!

Maydaypilot: "Written with the same enchanting touch as your first story."

I wasn't sure if a I could write acceptable erotica without compromising myself. I figured most of it was written by guys for guys. I wasn't sure if an "enchanting touch" or (thank you, JeremySpray1) "beautiful" descriptions were something that readers of erotica were looking for. I thought that "lovely erotica" was an oxymoron!!

So, thank you all!!!! :-)

very good story development. Nice to see what leads to a sexual encounter and not just jumping to the wham-bang. Looking forward to these girls exploring and learning how to please each other.

@Anonymous, you wrote: "Looking forward to these girls exploring and learning how to please each other."

Stay tuned!!! Not only do they learn how to please each other, they (eventually) learn how to please two other characters as well!! But that's the next series... 😏

I feel like I'm on a love rollercoaster after this one, Freya! You wrote about Katie very well, even though Cynthia does most of the talking. Looking forward to seeing what develops!

@Anonymous, yes, Cyn is a bit of a loudmouth, but you will find that Katie is a very strong young woman in her own way. And it gets even more rollercoaster-y!!