by slapper01
One dimensional writing, your thought process needs to wake up. Nice pictures but no difference in poses. Come on writer be better. Score 2.
To the anonymous commenter who complained about one-dimensional writing:
Why don't you post something under your username so we can see who you are, and then we can critique your obviously fantastic writing skills.
Anonymous commenters I understand the critiquing but why so much hate. If you don't like the story okay and if you do okay. But why make it personal. What has happened to us?
Just a profound thank you to the beautiful ‘Katy’ for posing for the photos.
Congratulations. You're not a born writer, but you had a good idea - which in the hands of a good erotica writer would make a great little novel - and you brought it here.
With an extra prize for the reader of the photographs, a beautiful, sensual model, lean and attractive, in exciting and stimulating poses.