All Comments on 'Katy's Body Pt. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think I would rather worship that goreous body than to punish it!

ThomasLordThomasLordover 1 year ago

Another 5*. I do wish the forced orgasm theme had been explored more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

One dimensional writing, your thought process needs to wake up. Nice pictures but no difference in poses. Come on writer be better. Score 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

To the anonymous commenter who complained about one-dimensional writing:

Why don't you post something under your username so we can see who you are, and then we can critique your obviously fantastic writing skills.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Anonymous commenters I understand the critiquing but why so much hate. If you don't like the story okay and if you do okay. But why make it personal. What has happened to us?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

very nic and a beautiful body on cute whore

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just a profound thank you to the beautiful ‘Katy’ for posing for the photos.

RobarretoRobarretoover 1 year ago

Congratulations. You're not a born writer, but you had a good idea - which in the hands of a good erotica writer would make a great little novel - and you brought it here.

With an extra prize for the reader of the photographs, a beautiful, sensual model, lean and attractive, in exciting and stimulating poses.

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Dominant male in a relationship with a submissive and exhibitionist female. Both of us are probably more focused on humiliation, exhibitionism and restraint more than on hard core pain,

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