All Comments on 'Keep This Secret Pt. 08'

He's using mind control to open the women up to new experiences that they might not otherwise want, so it's not like in this world he would seek normal consent. But the way he treated Krista about anal sex felt very wrong, even in the world of the story. Even though he opened her up to anal sex's potential, he didn't work up to it and prepare her physically. He basically just went for it, and it doesn't work that way. It would be terrible, painful, unnecessarily cruel that way. It was just so gratingly wrong. Your character says he never asks before he does something. I find that so hard to accept that anyone would act that way who isn't dangerous to be around.

He has evolved himself, good to read. His freeing of Krista was poignant.

5/5