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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

The story was great but it’s gone downhill. The dynamic changed as Joan attitude changed. Dean was a mistake.

waynejeffrieswaynejeffries9 months agoAuthor

Agreed, Dean was a mistake for Joan, but she does not know that yet, as far as the story goes, I appreciate the comment and ensure you that Dean will not be around for long. I took a chance here, and it may turn out wrong, but it may also open more doors. I do appreciate your candor and comments.

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