by lustwords
"To Be Continued"
Why?
From first chapter I liked plot and thought it had potential then ch 2 veered really cucky and the conversations about such erotic and emotionally charged matters were more like an English debate about how best to set a table for the Queen.
Dialogue in this chapter was better and liked Gene having fun with Sandy. Best part was plot arc progression with Able’s potential threat to Roxy.
I look forward to next chapter.