All Comments on 'Lemons to Lemonade Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
WHY

did you go from LOVING WIVES to EROTIC COOUPLINGS?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Easily the most disturbing line from this story is . . .

"To Be Continued"

Why?

Greyheaded1Greyheaded1about 4 years ago
Better conversations and better plot line

From first chapter I liked plot and thought it had potential then ch 2 veered really cucky and the conversations about such erotic and emotionally charged matters were more like an English debate about how best to set a table for the Queen.

Dialogue in this chapter was better and liked Gene having fun with Sandy. Best part was plot arc progression with Able’s potential threat to Roxy.

I look forward to next chapter.

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