All Comments on 'Lifestyle Ch. 07: Threesomes'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What sort of self-hating asshole wants this sort of disrespect and a whore for a wife?

StubbyoneStubbyone11 months ago

Hmmmm . Again, this story has a decent plot and story line, but the only emotion created is hard feelings toward Jan, as she continues to treat her husband as being less important than her. The dialog is rather dry. More like a newspaper report than an erotic story, even though there is sex taking place. It’s hard to develop feelings for any of the characters.

Only a 3-for this one.

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I've enjoyed writing for my own benefit in the past. Being a geek in my previous careers, learning to write a good story is now a challenge for my spare time. I'm an older male interested in the Loving Wives category, with those stories involving consensual sharing. I don't...