All Comments on 'Lindsey'

So dull I couldn't get past page 1. Seeing there were nine others made me quit on the spot.

It covered a range of fun. A bit long, but hey, it was worth it to read how she descended into what she became.

Just too far fetched and idiotic

why did linzy hate jill so mutch hope jill comes out on to

So lame. So much hate and contempt. So long both story needs some serious attention

I also felt like it was way to long. Not sure if it would have helped to maybe break it down to another chapter or just drop some. I am not into the findom thing at all. giving her access to all financials to me is hard to fantasy over. we will look at next chapter and see what happens. we need tiny tits to submit to Jilly twat somehow or at least do some munching.