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by Sunadmire

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PlaasJapiePlaasJapie12 months ago

I just love the way you write local stories. You introduced an interesting twist - from 'Fertility Issues' I thought that Lisa and Rudy were an item. Can't wait to see how it all plays out.

Keep up the good work!

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc12 months ago

Little slow getting its momentum but the back half of the tale was well done. I liked the twist at the end. 4*

conistonoldman23conistonoldman2311 months ago

A most interesting and entertaining read.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy11 months ago

Enjoyable story!

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SexyMosadiSexyMosadi6 months ago

Hi Sunadmire

You've sandwiched the main story, of Lisa falling in love and marrying Adrian, nicely between the side story of Lisa and Rudy, who are deeply in love with each other.

Or is it the other way round, with Lisa and Adrian's love story, is only the side story of Rudy and Lisa's bigger love story!

Cant wait to see how all unfolds.

ErilogicaErilogicaabout 2 months ago

Interesting twist in the plot. I was sure Rudy and Lisa was going to marry.

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Love to read hot stories with some drama. Got going on a few stories. I try to give it a South African flavour, while keeping it relevant to the international audience. If you like my stories, give it a high score. Enjoy.

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