All Comments on 'Live Together (Illustrated Version)'

Obviously english is not your first language, your translation leaves much to be desired. Hard to read or enjoy. An editor would help considerably, just my opinion

I'd immediately grab her and pull her to me tightly. My red warm lips would start giving her moist hungry kisses everywhere she exposed her warm naked skin.

On Fridays she wouldn't come in till sometime after 6pm. She always stopped by her boyfriends dorm room for a quickie then straight to me with her pussy full of his delicious spent cum.

She would have quickly crawl up on my bed, lay flat on my back and nervously await the creamy treat she had stored just for me. She said that she always told her boyfriend that I was eagerly awaiting to suck every warm drop from her well fucked pussy.

It had become our regular treat. My eating her freshly fucked creampie clean. She had, indeed trained me well!

Orpheum69

The illustrations do enhance the story.

Lovely women!

I liked the narrative and the illustrations.

Good job

Albert. Saludos de 🇨🇱🇪🇨

Erotica, one of the hardest genres to write. Not easy task, at all.

Thank you very much latin eagle.