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All Comments on 'Long Overdue Time Away Ch. 02'

by Windman1

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Chapters not long enough and you really, really need to edit!

Windman1Windman1almost 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you for you for your feedback.

I’m new to this. I will take your comments and work to get better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Why would a 48 year old woman who does not date have a bare pussy? Just to be stylish, or because her hairdresser told her everyone does it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I’m Giving Up

Read first two “chapters” these are far too short.

Story galloping on at breakneck pace, no foreplay, no sensations- just rushed.

I wanted it to work but I’m giving up!

chytownchytownabout 3 years ago
Short And HOT****

Talk about a quicky!! No not the sex, the Ch 02. Thanks for sharing.

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Average kind man likes romantic eroticism. Well and sex, I do like sex. Im mean thats what brought me here. I believe in being kind to people, we don’t have to have the same beliefs to treat each other with respect.

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