All Comments on 'Loss of Control Pt. 11'

Same old stuff. More SOS. Something new, a baby, always nice to add to the family, but then again why test for pregnancy every chapter if that wasn’t already in the cards. Then more SOS. Carla gets...nope more SOS... like sand piling up on the beach a few more grains, or shovels full, or even truck loads, have no meaning...

Wait...

Wait...

Mr. Stevenson and the in-laws arrive...holy crap PLOT! Are we on our way to an ending or are we simply looking to complete to full family affair. Assuming this is plot moving event that will start in chapter 12, when you reread this story maybe you will see why chapters 6 thru11 are skippable, or could have possibly been written into one 4 page chapter

Glad you are adding to the plot with new characters. Keep writing. The last few chapters added to the despair of the characters. Now we have another group of characters what will happen next rescue or oblivion. Keep writing.

Honestly I too the advice of a review posted on Chapter 10 and just read the last few paragraphs to spare me the depression of reading this. I see everyone is in the same place as before Brad, Ellen, and probably Kyle are all probably suffering no consequences and Dianna is suffering for having a horrible wife that was reared in a family of a horrible set of sisters.

Yay.

To the author, I don hate your writing. In fact, I will echo a previous review that I can paraphrase as saying you write TOO well. You make characters people can relate to and in some cases care for. Since your readers care for them, watching them suffer without hope of redemption has just become too painful a reading experience

Love the story. All the chapters.