Lucian's Temptations Pt. 07

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Camille was simply left to wonder.

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Ilfen1Ilfen1over 2 years ago

Hi. I really want to like this story, but the desire for a loving and romantic relationship from Camille doesn't seem to gel with the reality of the subject matter of this story, which is domination, borderline abuse and the fact that her husband is the literal devil.

The biggest problem is that clearly Camille doesn't enjoy any of this. It would be another thing if she got of from pain and being dominated or being cuckqueaned by the "whores", but the thing is she doesn't, and so the reader is stuck with a protagonist that does not enjoy what is happening to her, thus leading to confusion over what this story is trying to be.

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