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Click hereMary looks at Jen, "And you want help how?"
Jen smiles, "I thought we would end this lovely overnight with one last bang. We will both blow him. He can time us 1 minute each, then we swap. Whoever makes him cum gets to jerk him off onto the other woman, that way he gets to keep his promise to you to watch him cum. The we can hit the showers and get some real breakfast."
"Great idea." I say.
Mary smiles, "Yeah I bet you Love the idea." I just smile. "But I think we need 90 seconds. 60 is too little time."
I lay back and spread my legs a bit. The women wind up straddling each leg. I show them the timer and say, "Since it was Jen's idea I think she should go first." Man they don't hesitate. Jen dives right on sucking down, running her tongue around it in her mouth, pulling up and jerking the base while flicking the head with her tongue and or just sucking on the head. I call time and Mary while she doesn't jerk me off with my head in her mouth she sucks and licks for all she is worth. If I had to say who was better I am not sure I could.
I notice Mary reach for the nightstand but I don't see why. She sits back, and as Jen is sucking me Mary calls my name and I look up. "Looks Jen knows what she is doing."
"Oh yeah." I gasp "and so do you."
"Oh that is so sweet" and she smiles, "but you are going to cum for me when it's my turn. In less than 2 minutes I am going to be jerking you off so your cum splatters all over Jen's pretty face."
"Oh god" I moan just as I call, "Time"
The women swap and I fell Mary's mouth engulf me and she slides a lubed finger in my ass and starts wiggling it around.
Oh God she really wants to win. I simply groan as Mary massages my prostate and tries to suck my soul out through my dick. I am thinking I might make it I am half way done, when Mary finds the right button. I groan out, and my hips heavy up with almost no warning. Just as I groaned Mary pulled off me and started jerking me while pointing me at Jen's face. Jen accepted her lose like a trooper. She closed her eyes, opened her mouth and stuck out her tongue. All it took was a couple more jerks and I was spraying my cum on Jen's face. Two good shots on Jen, and a few dribbling shots that oozed down Mary's hand.
I lay back, close my eyes and let out a content sigh. I feel the bed move so I look up. Mary is helping Jen up and sees me looking. "We are going to go shower. You can shower after us." Mary says.
"We are?" I ask.
"Yes we are." She turns Jen around so she is facing me. "Because of you the poor woman is blind." she laughs.
Jen can't open her eyes. They are covered in cum. I was thinking of following them in when the bathroom door closed. Ah well I will lay here and relax for a bit.
***
Well this gets me to the end of the overnight. I have had a few comments about the Labors. Some like it, some questioning what counts. Here is how I count them, Which is described in Part 5.
1 The first fuck to seal the deal
2 Naked on her couch to fuck me when I walk in
3 Putting in the remote vibe with the clerk helping and watching
4 An although it should be 1 am being generous with Sat night of the overnight
5 And Sunday AM of the overnight
I hadn't counted the Brazillian, because I was looking at it as grooming. Well yes it was recorded I didn't get any direct pleasure from it.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoThe labours - he isn’t telling her what is and what isn’t a labour. He’s a rapist because there isn’t any consent so anything she doesn’t want to do is technically a labour.
As for this...
“I hadn't counted the Brazillian, because I was looking at it as grooming. Well yes it was recorded I didn't get any direct pleasure from it.”
That’s more than a labour it’s a fucking ordeal. They’re meant to be labours for her, so if it wasn’t a labour she should have been able to refuse it? I’m calling bullshit on he didn’t get any pleasure out of it he’s definitely enjoying being a puppet master, dressing it up as a romantic outing is ridiculous.
FILMING everything ?! Like someone else mentioned, nothing is secure, those films will come out.
This is why blackmail stories just piss me off, which means I’m quitting here, there’s no guarantee that there will ever be an end to the labours and because he’s filming everything he’s getting more things to blackmail her with at every step of the way.
Best of luck with your writing. You are a creative writer and this story is coming along quite well for those who enjoy this sort of thing. If you submit something consensual in the future I’ll give it a go.
Tess (UK)
Anonymousover 3 years agoSo we are 5 labors into the story and we have already done (nearly) everything sexually that can be done to a woman. All three holes used - check. Lesbo - check. FMF three way - check. Etc...
So while there are a few more sexual events you can do to Mary and friends, are there really fifteen more, let’s say unique and exciting things left to do?
I say this because things are getting repetitive already. In this chapter alone the sexual events that happened to one woman also happened to a second and in some case to a third and fourth. It basically felt very dry and repetitive. As if you thought that simply changing the name of the woman would some how make the reusing the words we just read in a previous paragraph become new and exciting.
Think of it like this, what if you would have thought this chapter should have been about 400 women instead of two or four. Could you have written it in a way to make it unique and exciting without repeating anything or everything, no you couldn’t, and I don’t know any author here who could. It would have been boring and flat with no connection from the readers towards any of these characters.
It is the connection with the antagonist(s) and the protagonist(s) in every story that creates plausibility and therefore an emotional link with the reader that induces...well let’s just call it excitement.
Not saying it was a bad chapter, just a very repetitive one, and I’m worried about the story concept if you are struggling at five labors to get us to twenty.
Anonymousover 3 years agogood writing, but what a jerk, claiming he's not a monster and yet willing to hurt a woman just to be controlling, and what's with filming people's faces??? doesn't he know that nothing is truly safe??? if he was more considerate and less domineering, this would be even nicer (the sex is mostly quite hot, I just don't like when a guy hurts a woman or acts like a controlling jerk)
Massageman1over 3 years agoMore description of the waitresses would have been nice.
Sunday morning wood scene continuity error, if I read it correctly.
Several auto correct/spelling mistakes. If you want a proof reader I’d be glad to offer my services.
Other than that I’m thoroughly enjoying the stories twists and turns, even if they are on the fantastic side. Lol.
Stuart.
