All Comments on 'Mary's Unexpected Escapade Ch. 02'

by TheNewWriter

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Another fun read. Mixing present and past tenses in the same paragraph spoils the flow, but it all has a sense of naïvity which goes well with her new approach to sex.

KingCuddleKingCuddleabout 1 year ago

Love it! Which train are you a regular on?

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