All Comments on 'Middle Age Fun with Friends Ch. 02'

Almost word perfect. Shows that you do a good slow-proofing and not just rely on computer checking.

The story got to drag on more than a little with your fixation on the larger than life dick sizes. But do keep 'em coming, we always need new blood.

They need to figure out how to get daughter & her boyfriend in the group. That way mom can enjoy the boyfriend’s big cock. Great story!!!

Another two pages which haven’t progressed the story one iota.

It is strange that none of the participants in the group sex have any feelings of jealousy, angst or have performance issues. None are favouring a different partner over their spouse. It is all too emotionless.

Both parts 1 & 2 are GREAT! 5 stars to both. You write some wicked scenes. Much appreciated. Please keep writing. Thanks.

Interesting, entertaining twist.

Not overly enamored of this chapter though because it really does nothing to advance the storyline and it's borderline as to whether it belongs in the LW category either.

Well written and easy to read though.

Would have liked to see this chapter extended at least to the point of Pam telling her husband about what happened and his reaction to this turn of events.

Yeah!

3

Very creative turn. The story moves smoothly and at the proper rate. I find myself anxious about the next turn. I feel I'm caught in your trap. Well done.

Need to get daughter and boy friend together with mom and dad. Bet Dan would really love that young pussy.

Extremely hot

Hot, very hot

I’m sure this story has more parts yet.

I like it. Everyone is having a good time and We should all be more like Bonobos. Remember everyone, it washes off.