All Comments on 'Mr. Stacy'

Syntax was awful, poorly written but concept was really intriguing. Betsy was a serious cheap slut.

I am still learning how to write in English. Thank you.

You need to know English to write in it. You don't, so you shouldn't.

What exactly are you doing to learn how to write in English? I mean besides submitting garbage to this site in hopes you figure it out as you go. That doesn't, and never will work. You're a prime example of it not working.

Just stop until you're more than fluent in it. Average fluency won't make you a writer. It will only make it so you're understandable, not entertaining. You're a decade of intense instruction away from being of average skill in English, if not more