All Comments on 'Mrs. McGregor's Tawse Ch. 02'

Absolutely brilliant!! Permanent erection material!!!!

Trapped and conditioned. Perfect

I enjoyed this chapter...The introduction to the tawse, the enema, the shaving of his body hair and showing him his new place in the world...nicely done.

But. Please stick to writing your stories.in the past tense. Sometimes you insert a word that changes the tale into present tense.

It's annoying.

It's a shame there isn't a bit more description in your writing. You say the Governess caressed him to orgasm and that was it.

How did he feel. What were his thoughts. Was he staring at her large breasts in her starched white linen blouse.

A description of both the Governess and his mother would have been nice.

It's lacking sensuality and is becoming a bit sterile.

I like it but.....

I wish I'd had a dominant Mama and Governess like Stewart ;-)