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jamieanne63jamieanne63about 2 years ago

Such delightful training for Stuart! I like the additions of kissing the Superior's bottom and light toilet training...very nice!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
Rubbish 1☆

Do you read your stories before you post? I doubt it. If you did then you must have noticed how many times the story changed tense.

Did it flow? No!

Did it make sense? No!

It's not rocket science to stick to past tense surely?

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Trying writing for the first time. Let me know what you think.

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