All Comments on 'MSDS Society Ch. 03'

This story just went from a rather ridiculous plot to just plain FUCKED UP, and the inconsistency in it made it even worse. Referring to the other chapters, the final decision of becoming a master or slave was to be made in college and NOT immediately. And the other added inconsistencies in this story make it hard to follow at times. Oh, and by the way, you had David and his sister undress Mike twice, once in the living room and then again in the bedroom.

Loved overall plot waiting for him to go to the college for training

This is turning into one of my favorite stories ever? I can't wait to see what happens with the lawyer. I hope David still has to go to college.

Hot story!