by UnsatiatedNymph
This would be in terrible need of a very, very good editor, even if it wasn't a ridiculous plot that makes it barely worth reading, even in actual English.
"""""""Anonymous6 days ago
This would be in terrible need of a very, very good editor, even if it wasn't a ridiculous plot that makes it barely worth reading, even in actual English."""""", I agree with this wholeheartedly. He needas to learn English, and how to spell, as well.