All Comments on 'My Brother's Keeper Ch. 02'

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Bham487Bham4879 months ago

Copy of some many others on here. She will turn on her brother and start bullying him as well to please her new master. You can write but come up with something original.

OttawaJayOttawaJay9 months agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback! Chapter 3 will be up next week, and hopefully, you'll like where the story leads to. I think you'll be happy with the direction the series goes in down the road :)

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Excellent

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

very nice. keep writting

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Chapter 3 please

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