by Lightlytoastdleesh
Not bad for a first time writer, and in the cuckold genre. You handled it quite well, with just the requisite amount of gentle teasing, the way it should be.
Warning: The little anonymous boys who probably never have been with a woman, will swarm in here before long and trash the story, and trash you. They are nothing but little trolls, hiding under the bridge, or in their Mommy's basement. Ignore them
This was not a bad story, you kept me engaged though having a Tash and a Bash in the same story was a bit odd. If you were to write more, I would like to see her be just a bit more rough on Nick and slowly bring about Bash letting Nick suck his cock clean, which makes both men find their way to actually enjoy it. I don't care what people say, once you are good with eating a creampie, you are already good to lick it off the source.