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jupitercreekjupitercreek3 months ago

Whilst I am enjoying the story a lot, I must point out that you need someone to proof read before you publish. There are just so many spelling mistakes and/or incorrect words used which do detract from the overall experience.

I'm saying this as I think that if you could get that sorted out, you truly have the makings of a great story here.

I'll keep reading and hope that that side of things improves in coming chapters.

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A full biography is pending (not sure what to put here yet). Until then I am a very new writer having recently changed employment so now have time to enjoy life and writing as a hobby. More to come later.

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