All Comments on 'My Disgusting Activities'

Great start, 5 Stars. This has so much potential, I hope you carry on with this. I can't wait to read more.

Worth writing a sequel to. I know, it can be hard to flesh out a good idea. Starting is alway easier than continuing and closing.

I’d be interested in a subtle continuation, how the pair continue with her filth fascination. The challenge is to keep it credible, that the reader believes the actions and reactions and feelings throughout.