All Comments on 'My Disgusting Activities'

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VitavieVitavie12 months ago

Worth writing a sequel to. I know, it can be hard to flesh out a good idea. Starting is alway easier than continuing and closing.

I’d be interested in a subtle continuation, how the pair continue with her filth fascination. The challenge is to keep it credible, that the reader believes the actions and reactions and feelings throughout.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great start, 5 Stars. This has so much potential, I hope you carry on with this. I can't wait to read more.

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