All Comments on 'My FLR Pt. 01: The Beginning'

I don't believe ANYONE is that clueless. Not in a fictional story. Not in a Porn story. Just not that dumb.

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Flr go in fetish not here

I dislike these short chapters.

WTF? Two fucked up characters.

Congratulations, you wrote a horrible story with totally unlikeable characters.

I don't think you understand what FLR, SPH, and femdom mean. Also, you probably should work a LOT on your writing, as this is really very poor, even for an amateur. I usually try to say something positive about every story I read on here, but this one left me searching for a compliment. Nice punctuation, I guess.

I can’t wait for part 2! Wish this was me with her!

Viciously auspicious beginning chapter. Please do continue ;) 5 stars and Thank you!

Your "FLR" story is about you raping your wife? First off- unless there's a follow-up with her getting her revenge on you- this is a total gaslighting story with lies for a title and a pretty poorly written fantasy.