All Comments on 'My Housemaid, Maria - Saturday Night'

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Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc10 months ago

Meh - Too much focus on the sex for this genre, in my opinion. Other than lust, we have no real understanding as readers why they are coming together emotionally. How old is he? What does he do? Where did his toy box come about? 3.7*

acguyacguy10 months agoAuthor

Reply to Demosthenes384bc. Fair enough, but this is the third part of a series. I am still trying to understand the technical side of Literotica to show it as a series, so forgive me if it is unclear. Parts 1 and 2 might address some of your comments. If not, no worries and thanks for the comments.

acguyacguy10 months agoAuthor

Sorry but Ch 4 is delayed due to some health issues. I hope to get back to finishing it soon.

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