All Comments on 'My Lusty Landlady Ch. 06'

Man, A great story. Totally unbelievable but fantastic.

Please continue.

I love a 7 paragraph digression into smart boy philosophy from someone who doesn’t know that the past-tense of ‘grind’ is ‘ground,’ not “grinded.” Doesn’t undermine anything this person has to say in the midst of a 7 chapter orgy.

Anonymous - If that’s the only mistake you found in 7 chapters then I’m doing pretty well. If you want to be my editor just ask. Nothing to do with being a smart boy but more about the psychology of my main character. Even a 7 paragraph orgy can digress from sex. Do let me know what you’ve written, love to read it :)