by Talemaker67
Good story, but you need to proofread. If you're going to put something out, give it your best and don't be lazy.
Talemaker67 you are a true artist in words. Your descriptions are wonderful. You're the mistress of style. Don't worry about a few typos....I was reading fast and enjoying it all. Your stories provide great pleasure and I guarantee there will be more pleasure for me after I'm done sending my thanks to you. Whew, I'm hard. Thanks.