All Comments on 'My Pretend Sex Slave 01'

What amazing tension, with amazing little unexpected twists, loved it.

Very good start for the story

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Great story, can’t wait to see where it goes from here.

Great story! Please continue it!

This was fantastic, you had a lot of nice details that reminded me of college. If only I'd known women like this. I seemed to meet less confident women.

Thanks for the comment. Lisa is based closely on someone I knew in college. Events are obviously fiction, but yeah, it was a strange summer.

Really well written and quite compelling. Now I'd like to read more.

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