All Comments on 'My Ultra Smooth Lover'

by Dannyboy23

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piedadpiedadabout 1 year ago

The story was inconsistent with his skin being so sensitive he wouldn’t even shake hands and moving to full body contact as soon as the were together. Otherwise it was pretty good.

OnThefence2OnThefence212 months ago

No literary feedback, but Dang, this was hot.

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