My Journey of Discovery Ch. 03

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"Mistress," I said, "this doesn't seem to be much of a punishment."

"Your punishment will happen tomorrow. Rest now."

"Yes, Mistress." Rest I did. I rested myself right to sleep.

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MikePaulWritesMikePaulWrites9 months ago

Good writing, good reading. I'm glad you write lots of chapters.

JSA69JSA69over 1 year ago

Nice and Nasty. I'm glad there is more to come for Beth. Very enjoyable story!

Thors_FistThors_Fistover 2 years agoAuthor

In reply to anonymous - Lamar was to show that every racial, income and cultural group can be found in the BDSM community. Lamar was a lower income, lower educational level person, and despite that, he was still popular because he met needs of certain submissives. A group that wanted to be demeaned, humiliated and even hurt (his sub was a pain slut). Despite that, he was not unkind. He recognized Beth was not one of those who would appreciate his normal Dom behaviors and treated her better than his own groupies. Layton used him for only one purpose, an interracial experience with a BBC. BBC stories are stereotypes anyway as cock size is not dependent on race, but I needed a BBC to give Beth an interracial experience with a large cock.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I thought this was an excellent series right up until you introduce Master Lamar and then the whole thing turned into a waste of time. You had to make Master Lamar the black man a stereotype dumb dumb who thinks women are nothing but bitches and whores. If this is the character of the character Master Lamar he does not fit in this story. Why would Mistress L send trainee sub to this dumb dumb. Why would people who go to the trouble of creating this kind of community allow this dummy in their world. This character is nothing more than a racist stereotype and a complete turn off.

Ravey19Ravey19over 2 years ago

Beth was given explicit instructions and must learn to do that and not make decisions. However the initial punishment was downright dangerous even at 2 am or whenever it was and could have had serious repercussions for Beth. I agree with Tess (UK) there.

Still a 5 ⛤ chapter.

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