All Comments on 'Naked for You'

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_vision__vision_7 months agoAuthor

New author here - only my second story. Hope it turned you on. I'd love to hear your thoughts and feedback.

AG31AG317 months ago

I'm giving this a five because I think you executed it flawlessly. But it didn't suit my tastes as much as Naked for Me because the narrator didn't have enough dignity. I'm not saying he SHOULD have more dignity. Just that I would have liked it better. I did still really like the "voice over" style. Is that the right term?

_vision__vision_7 months agoAuthor

@Ag31: thank you! Interesting feedback - could you elaborate or give an example? Might be relevant for future stories ;-)

NegamerguyNegamerguy6 months ago

Loved it! Hope you continue, and I can't wait to see what comes next...5 stars

BissexualfaggotBissexualfaggot6 months ago

Great story! Love the fact that you asked your partner to look you in the eyes when you come, it's so dirty and passionate, love it. Would enjoy very much sucking your cock for sure and I would lokk at you directly in the eyes to show you how much I enjoy it. I would want you to watch me swallow your delicious sperm... mmm mium!

Thanx, love dicks :)

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