All Comments on 'Natalie - The Body Builder Ch. 03'

Apologies for some of the spelling errors and lines breaks. Still working on my writing skills. Hope y'all enjoyed it.

Your descriptions about the BDSM aspects were excellent. The clothes pins thing you did I have also tried. Hurts at first. You described it well. Also makes me think this should be categorized there. The part where you wrote the phrase "She fucking slapped me", made me to start rubbing myself. Cannot wait for the next chapter.

I was sent this story to check out and was not disappointed. The slap was a brilliant touch. I loved how you incorporated real D/s dynamics. There are several aspects to like in this writing. Like how you discuss the mental capacity to switch, fully submitting, the permission to cum and giving yourself to a Master or Mistress. The rope talk is legit. If a rope is too thin it can cause harmful issues. I would've liked more. Shorter is not always better. You went to the point.

Part 4 has a lot to live up too.

hot & spicy

I also live for moments like this. Cheers

bdsm gold!

You had me at the slap. I luv being slapped during rough sex. Your description of the shook when the slap landed is how I feel. Each chapter gets better.

Good read, belongs in bdsm category

Pretty confusing story and I had to read it twice.